What do you think?
Since I had my blog reviewed, I've been thinking of changing the description up above. Today, on a whim, I decided to do it. You probably don't remember what it said before. Actually, I'm not sure I remember it word for word, but my aim was to change the description to match what I have been posting about. What do you think? Is it too wordy? Any other constructive comments?
Thanks!
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3 comments:
You're right, I can't remember either. But, I think it's too wordy...
My comment on it is that the light type face on the white page is hard to read. A little anyway. Maybe try to go without all caps, all caps is hard to read too. Maybe break it up with a few lines in between. The html for that is (br) - just replace the parenthesis with the carat symbol.
Personally I don't like the phrase "online earning opportunities". I think it sounds too commercial, when you really have more tips and tricks (as opposed to some sites I see that seem to be only Pay Per Post articles. Ick) Also, that might bring you up weird in search engines-that could be to your benefit, I'm not really sure. You might get folks looking to find online earning ops who find you by mistake. . . .
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